Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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still

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debated about the

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should take care

themselves

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of themselves

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from

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any

crime

commitment and some

people

say it

obviously

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the responsible

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responsible

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of the

government

. It will be discussed and

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explained

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in the following essay.

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the one hand, the

government

should

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make

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the

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apply

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regulation

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regulations

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related

crime

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to crime

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prevention and need to socialise that for all

of

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apply

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the citizen

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citizen

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citizens

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. For sure all

of

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apply

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people

understand

about

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their

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could get arrested if they commit

crime

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a crime

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and

also

inappropriate behaviour which

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disadvantages

others

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other

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people

.

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, the

government

restrict

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citizens

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to avoid

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from

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using

drug

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drugs

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. And makes socialization about the negative impact

using

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drug

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drugs

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for all

people

.

Furthermore

, the

government

should make sure the

people

to

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get basic

necessity

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necessities

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like food, health bills, and education.

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, if all of

that is

pricey. It can

makes

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people

doing

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commit

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crime

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crimes

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such

as

steal

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stealing

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or

rob

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a house.

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the other hand,

the

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individual

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individuals

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need to prepare

themselve

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themselves

with basic martial art

for

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to

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protect

themselve

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themselves

eventually

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get any kind of

threaten

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threatening

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crime

. It

is

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apply

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can prevent

themselve

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themselves

if they get the other want to do bad

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toward your life.

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also

the individual should wear appropriate which

is

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not appear excessive.

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instance

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the

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people

should not use expensive

jewerly

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jewellery

when

walk

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alone. It can reduce

desire

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the desire

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for

people

to commit

crime

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crimes

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because there

no

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potential for doing a

crime

. In conclusion, the

authority

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should

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make

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makes

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make

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a regulation

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for

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prevent

people

commit

a

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apply

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crimes

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crime

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crimes

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and

also

provided

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provide

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people

with basic needs

while

the

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apply

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individuals

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individual

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individuals

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prepare

themselve

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themselves

with martial

art

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arts

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for

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protect

themselve

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themselves

and

also

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wear

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wearing

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appropriate like not using

appear

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apply

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jewelry

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when

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walking

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walk

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walking

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alone. It can reduce

desire

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the desire

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to commit a

crime

because disappear the opportunity.