The two charts below show the living arrangements of two different age groups in a certain country in 2015.
The
given
pie charts give information about who people live with, grouped into two various Verb problem
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age
in one country in the year 2015.
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ages
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that,
individuals who lived with their parents and with their flatmates, both decreased after turning Remove the comma
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to
35 Change preposition
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years
old. In addition
, older poeple prefered
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people prefer
more
to live with their partners or Correct quantifier usage
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spouse
than youngsters.
In 2015, People who were 25 to 34 Fix the agreement mistake
spouses
years
old more
selected to live with their mothers and fathers and Add a missing verb
were more
also
more chose to share a home with another person, but after getting older they decreased. Also
, the percentage of those who lived alone, between 25 and 34 years
old, almost stayed the same for 35-44 years
old
.
Turning to the figure for Correct word choice
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yonger
people who lived with a Correct your spelling
younger
girl friend
or Correct your spelling
girlfriend
boy friend
or their spouse, it was the same as Correct your spelling
boyfriend
living
alone percentage, but it saw a Correct article usage
the living
dramatical
trend by around getting triple in the older ages.Replace the word
dramatic
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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