9. Full-time university students should spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Full-
time
university
students
should dedicate plenty of
time
on
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studying.
However
, it is necessary to spend some
time
on other
activities
. In
this
essay, I will explore the positive sides of having additional
activities
while
studying full-
time
in
the
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educational institution. From my point of view, being involved in other
activities
is helpful for absorbing information better.
While
you have a lot
of
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on your plate to study, the brain does not consume all the information in the right way.
This
might lead to poor academic performance and discourage
students
.
Whereas
,
students
who attend
to
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different
kind
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activities
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such
as sports, dances, volunteering and so on,
they
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tend to show better themselves in educational
activities
.
For instance
, BBC has written that the more people do active
sport
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, the better academic achievement is shown among
students
.
Secondly
, having other
activities
increase student's skills and enhance well-being.
Students
who have different hobbies are more versatile, which
also
may define their leadership qualities. Even though,
students
who
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have only one activity, they can be great at it and spend
time
qualitatively, despite the fact that sometimes it might be
time
and
energy consuming
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.
For example
, Cambridge University says that having only two or three
activities
are
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quite enough to be happy, as it has
social
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, physical and emotional impact
in
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people’s
life
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. In conclusion,
although
studying program is
full
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time
, it is essential to be involved in different
activities
. First and foremost, it has
positive
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impact on health and helps to succeed in education.
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