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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

#threats #environment
Nowadays, global warming has
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to
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peoples
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, animals and
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the environments
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environments
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environment
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 by increasing temperature cause climate change. So,
government
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 should supervise and solve the problem immediately. The following paragraphs examine the cause of
issue
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 and recommend some practical solutions to help the earth get better. Factories
plays
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 a significant part in
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global
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 warming in the world by using fossil
fuel
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 in manufacturing and
emission
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 a CO2
to
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 the air without considering
impact
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to
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 surrounding area and
environment
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, so
authority
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 should always check
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the standard
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standard
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 of manufactory system for preventing to emission
CO2
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 according
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 rule determine. In
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, air traveling;
from
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 the experimental results when aircraft fly in 10 minutes fuel
have
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used around 2000 liters
that
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more than other traveling ways,
hence
,
government
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 restrict flying and
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 taxes
for
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 reduce
number
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 of flying.
However
,
government
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each
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 country should
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to solve
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with
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this
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to
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first
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 priority
Although
, industries may lead
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 increasing
the
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pollution, but undeniable that we
also
 have part as well, nowadays, a growing number of consuming of
customer
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 may lead to waste, particularly,
a
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plastic
bag
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, which
using
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 biodegraded
over
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 100 years and
make
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pollution in the soil, water, and air. So, we should have to
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 to sociality as well,
to begin
, we can help
community
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the community
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 by
separate
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 waste into the right bin, and reusing a plastic bag, using cloth bags or paper bags when
go
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 to shopping.
Additionally
,
authority
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 should collaborate with
business
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 side in
encourage
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 to use
a
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packaging’s
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 goods that
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 biodegraded. In conclusion, global warming is mainly caused by human activities and not
considering
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 with dangerous emission
CO2
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 by industries,
moreover
,
government
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 less attend to manage problems, which is increases
the
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global warming.
However
, every side should participate
for solve
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the problem
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problem
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 for sustainable development.
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structure
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introduction
Introduce the essay topic in the opening paragraph, briefly outlining the main points that will be discussed, to provide a clear roadmap for the reader.
main points
Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea, supporting it with specific examples or evidence to strengthen the argument.
linking words
Use a variety of linking words and phrases to connect ideas and paragraphs, helping to create a smooth flow throughout the essay.
task response
Address the essay task by discussing both the causes and solutions to global warming comprehensively, ensuring all parts of the prompt are covered.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Climate change
  • Earth's atmosphere
  • Carbon dioxide
  • Methane
  • Nitrous oxide
  • Emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy efficiency
  • Afforestation
  • Carbon footprint
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