The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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a

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technical area in

town

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the town

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Norbiton

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of Norbiton

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as it is now and some changes to take place in the future.

This

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town

are

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is

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located between

river

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the river

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in the north and the main road in the south

side

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.

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, it can be observed that a manufacturing area is going to be developed

much

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.

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, it will become more convenient for the citizens and the children, with new facilities like, a playground,school and medical centre,shops.

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, significant alterations

is

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going to

be occurred

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to the farmland,it is planned to be moved to the northeastern

side

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of the river .

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of the farmland, will be

conctructed

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constructed

a residential area and a bridge with a t-shape path which added to the

roundbound

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roundabout

in the centre of

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Norbiton. Along the west

side

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of the round will be added a short

street

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with new housings. Meanwhile, opposite

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short

street

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are planned to build shops. As maps show, along the the

street

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is going to be erected playground with

little

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a little

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path by the east

side

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of the circle. On both sides of the

street

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factories will be replaced by housing with reshaped in size

school

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schools

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at the end

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of

this

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street

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closely

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close

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to the east.

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,in the middle of the main road will be

paved

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a paved

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little round road linking to the central

roundbound

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roundabout

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