The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The images depict the same
a
technical area in Correct article usage
apply
town
Correct article usage
the town
Norbiton
as it is now and some changes to take place in the future. Change preposition
of Norbiton
This
town are
located between Change the verb form
is
river
in the north and the main road in the south Add an article
the river
side
.
Overall
, it can be observed that a manufacturing area is going to be developed much
. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Thus
, it will become more convenient for the citizens and the children, with new facilities like, a playground,school and medical centre,shops.
Firstly
, significant alterations is
going to Change the verb form
are
be occurred
to the farmland,it is planned to be moved to the northeastern Change to the active voice
occur
have occurred
side
of the river . Instead
of the farmland, will be conctructed
a residential area and a bridge with a t-shape path which added to the Correct your spelling
constructed
roundbound
in the centre of Correct your spelling
roundabout
the
Norbiton. Along the west Correct article usage
apply
side
of the round will be added a short street
with new housings. Meanwhile, opposite this
short street
are planned to build shops.
As maps show, along the the street
is going to be erected playground with little
path by the east Correct article usage
a little
side
of the circle. On both sides of the street
factories will be replaced by housing with reshaped in size school
Fix the agreement mistake
schools
at the end
of this
street
closely
to the east. Change the word
close
Finally
,in the middle of the main road will be paved
little round road linking to the central Correct article usage
a paved
roundbound
.Correct your spelling
roundabout
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