It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.). There is no reason why people should stop this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is a natural

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for animal

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to become extinct

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there is no reason why people should stop

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from happening. I partially support

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vision because during the centuries a lot of

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became

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extinct

and in the majority of

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cases wasn't by

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end. If we think about dinosaurs we can simply get an example about how men had absolutely nothing to do with the disappearance of

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entire

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. Earth is

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constantly

changing and we have mostly no power to stop the

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,

eventually

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the sun (

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a star) will stop

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, and will become cold,

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all

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of life on earth will cease to exist, we can't stop

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, and it is inevitable,

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there are possibilities that meteorites could hit

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like it supposedly happened with dinosaurs (we are not certain that

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was the events that caused their

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extinction

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I believe that humans

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use of technologies

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an incredible increase in the use of

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are affecting the lives of many

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causing many to be

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extinct

or close to

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the greed of some to have trophies or rare pieces obtainable by killing certain animals;

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, the increased amount of the world population. I will analyse each point in the following paragraph.

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, technologies and

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are destroying entire ecosystems, we can often see videos on social media, and news about turtles or fish that get stuck in

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bottles or bags and die.

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get usually dumped in the sea

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, or many animals that get stuck with

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dumped on the side of the roads.

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if we consider the massive increase of the world population, we were 250,000 in the year 1000 and close to 8

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in the year 2024, it's simple logic that the demand

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food to feed everybody is consistently bigger than what it was 1000 years ago. Producing and mostly

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food produces a lot of pollution and

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depleating

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depleting

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of fish

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human gree, a lot of

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like elephants or lions are very rare to be found, and the few left are often hunted by humans who illegally sell their horns or skin to greedy rich people. My conclusion is that yes, the

exctinction

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extinction

of many

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is a natural

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but I

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believe that as humans we can help not accelerate the

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or try to not contribute to it.