It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.). There is no reason why people should stop this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is a natural
process
for animal
species
to become extinct
hence
there is no reason why people should stop
this
from happening. I partially support
this
vision because during the centuries a lot of
species
became
extincted
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extinct
and in the majority of
the
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cases wasn't by
human
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end. If we think about dinosaurs we can simply get an example about how men had absolutely nothing to do with the disappearance of
this
entire
species
. Earth is
costantly
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constantly
changing and we have mostly no power to stop the
process
,
eventually
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the sun (
that is
a star) will stop
to burn
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, and will become cold,
furthermore
, when that
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form
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of life on earth will cease to exist, we can't stop
this
, and it is inevitable,
also
there are possibilities that meteorites could hit
earth
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like it supposedly happened with dinosaurs (we are not certain that
this
was the events that caused their
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extinction
).
On the other
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I believe that humans
due to
the
raising
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use of technologies
along with
an incredible increase in the use of
plastic
are affecting the lives of many
species
causing many to be
extincted
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extinct
or close to
nonetheless
the greed of some to have trophies or rare pieces obtainable by killing certain animals;
Moreover
, the increased amount of the world population. I will analyse each point in the following paragraph.
Firstly
, technologies and
plastic
are destroying entire ecosystems, we can often see videos on social media, and news about turtles or fish that get stuck in
plastic
bottles or bags and die.
Plastic
get usually dumped in the sea
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, or many animals that get stuck with
plastic
dumped on the side of the roads.
Also
if we consider the massive increase of the world population, we were 250,000 in the year 1000 and close to 8
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in the year 2024, it's simple logic that the demand
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food to feed everybody is consistently bigger than what it was 1000 years ago. Producing and mostly
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such
food produces a lot of pollution and
also
depleating
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depleting
depletion
of fish
aswell
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as well
.
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human gree, a lot of
species
like elephants or lions are very rare to be found, and the few left are often hunted by humans who illegally sell their horns or skin to greedy rich people. My conclusion is that yes, the
exctinction
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extinction
of many
species
is a natural
process
but I
also
believe that as humans we can help not accelerate the
process
or try to not contribute to it.
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