the following table shows the number of factory workers for a given tie period in germany

The table illustrates the

number

of male and female

employees

and the total of both

as well as

factories

for every decade starting from 1851 to 1901 in Germany.

Overall

, it is apparent that the highest

number

of

factories

was in 1881 which had 721

factories

.

While

in 1851 was the year that had the biggest total

employees

at 477,100. In 1851 and 1861, the total

number

of

employees

moderately declined to around 200,000

employees

and the

number

of

factories

were

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slightly higher from 225 to 227.

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in

1851

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1851,

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the total

employees

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peaked at 477,100 and it

was decreasing

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every 10

year

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until it hit the lowest

number

in 1901 at 61,000

employees

.In 1871,the

number

of

factories

rapidly increased to around 400 .

However

, in 1881, the

number

of

factories

peaked at 721

factories

. In the next 10 years in 1891, the

number

fell to 625 similar to 1871. In the

last

period, the

number

of

factories

went down to 600