Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone's lives. Some people say that advertising is positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views include your opinion.

It is considered by some that broadcasting has become a downside

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of their

lives

,

while

there are others who think that it is an upside section of their

lives

. A lot can be inferred from the way of their thinking.

This

interpretation might give us about their personalities.

Although

I agree that it is important to display products or services, I cannot ignore the negative sides. On the one hand, some people hold the view that promotion has a negative effect on their

lives

.

That is

to say, It is more likely that these groups are not able to control their attitudes or

behaviors

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behaviours

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on

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toward

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shopping.

This

is because they have an

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emotional

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emotionally

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personality

,

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therefore

could not

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manage their emotions in some

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situations

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situation

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which are faced

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with

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to

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with

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attractive

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the attractive

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advertisements

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advertisement

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advertisements

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. By doing so, people tend to buy

the

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number of stuffs which are unnecessary and waste their money. Take

toys

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advertising as an example; children decide on the basis of their emotions and

by

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apply

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these kinds of colorful and attractive marketing cause

a

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problem

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problems

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for their parents.

On the other hand

, an opposing view asserts that advertising

play

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a crucial role

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their

lives

. To put it differently, it helps them to make

a

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best decision among

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various types of brands.

This

is because when new outcomes are displayed on billboards they become familiar with the new ones. If they intend to pay money

for

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it is more probable that they will compare new products with the former, and after that choose one of them. A good illustration

for

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this

is

smarts

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phone companies. On the basis of their

needs

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they are able to buy the one

is

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suitable for them.

Hence

, we cannot ignore the power of advertising.

To conclude

,

although

views differ about whether advertising is a good stuff or not good stuff

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of our people's life, I believe that it depends on our personality to how see it and employ it in our life.