The line graph below shows exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.

The line graph below shows exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.
The line chart shows data about rubber duck exports in three different countries between 2013 and 2017. In general, Only two countries in the graph
that
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apply
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have to increase the sales volume
at the end
of the period.
However
, only one country has failed to increase
the
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its
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export volume from 2013 to 2017.
Firstly
, the UK have a steady growth
at
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from
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the
begining
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beginning
of 2013 until 2017.
On the other hand
,
the
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EU
transaction
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transactions
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have
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apply
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dropped in 2015 before
it have overtake
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overtook
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the UK in 2017 and the EU
have
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had
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dominance
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dominant
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the
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apply
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sale
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sales
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in 2017 at the top of
UK
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the UK
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.
Lastly
, The USA
have extend
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extended
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it
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its
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sales in 2014 but between 2014 and 2016, rubber
ducks
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duck
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exports
remain
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remained
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steady until 2017
it have
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when they
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significantly
drop
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dropped
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. In conclusion, not all
nation
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nations
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in the graph have
expand
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expanded
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they
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their
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sales except
USA
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the USA
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. The EU have
lead
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led
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the trade of rubber
duck
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ducks
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based on the diagram.
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