The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.
The line graph below illustrates the daily average
number
of Use synonyms
folk
who live in the UK commuters travelling by Use synonyms
vehicles
, Fix the agreement mistake
vehicle
bus
or Use synonyms
train
between 1970 and 2030. It is obvious that the Use synonyms
people
used the Use synonyms
car
very much in all of the 6 decades.
Use synonyms
According to
the line graph, As you can see, the individual that used the Linking Words
car
in 1970 was approximately 5 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
Also
, 9 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
Change to a plural noun
folks
folk
will Use synonyms
use
their Use synonyms
car
for travelling in2030. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
bus
started about 4 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
people
used Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
the
device. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, From 1970 to 1980 the Linking Words
Use synonyms
people
who used the Correct quantifier usage
number of people
bus
did not change. Use synonyms
However
, from 1980 to 2030, the large Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
folk
who used the Use synonyms
bus
and are going to Use synonyms
use
it in Use synonyms
future
to travel will decrease. Use synonyms
In addition
, from 1970 to 2000, the host of Linking Words
people
who used the Use synonyms
train
added in 2000 the Use synonyms
number
Use synonyms
folk
who used the Use synonyms
train
was 3 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
It is clear that
from 2000 to 2010 the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
who usedUse synonyms
Fix the agreement mistake
trains
train
had not changed. But, from 2010 to 2030 the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
who used the Use synonyms
train
and are going to Use synonyms
use
it in Use synonyms
future
to travel will be additive.
In conclusion, the Use synonyms
people
who live and are going to live in the Use synonyms
future
in the UK how much used and are going to will Use synonyms
use
three different vehicles (Use synonyms
car
, Use synonyms
bus
and Use synonyms
train
). Use synonyms
Therefore
, As you can see, cars had and will have the highest rate in Linking Words
future
and past.Use synonyms
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