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The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.

The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.
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The line graph below illustrates the daily average
number
 of
folk
 who live in the UK commuters travelling by
vehicles
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vehicle
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,
bus
 or
train
 between 1970 and 2030. It is obvious that the
people
 used the
car
 very much in all of the 6 decades.
According to
 the line graph, As you can see, the individual that used the
car
 in 1970 was approximately 5
million
.
Also
, 9
million
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folks
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folk
 will
use
 their
car
 for travelling in2030.
Moreover
, the
bus
 started about 4
million
people
 used
this
the
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device.
Furthermore
, From 1970 to 1980 the
people
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 who used the
bus
 did not change.
However
, from 1980 to 2030, the large
number
 of
folk
 who used the
bus
 and are going to
use
 it in
future
 to travel will decrease.
In addition
, from 1970 to 2000, the host of
people
 who used the
train
 added in 2000 the
number
folk
 who used the
train
 was 3
million
.
It is clear that
 from 2000 to 2010 the
number
 of
people
 who used
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trains
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train
 had not changed. But, from 2010 to 2030 the
number
 of
people
 who used the
train
 and are going to
use
 it in
future
 to travel will be additive. In conclusion, the
people
 who live and are going to live in the
future
 in the UK how much used and are going to will
use
 three different vehicles (
car
,
bus
 and
train
).
Therefore
, As you can see, cars had and will have the highest rate in
future
 and past.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, folk, bus, train, people, car, million, use, future with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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