the table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. summarise the information by selecting and reproitng the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. summarise the information by selecting and reproitng the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table displays information about changes in
modes
of
travel
in England over a period of 15 years from 1985 to 2000. The units are measured in miles for the average
distance
traveled
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per person per year.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the average
distance
for all
modes
of transportation has increased except for walking and bicycling in the years 1985 and 2000.
Moreover
, the car was the most used mode of
travel
in England over the same period. The total average for all
modes
of
travel
in 1985 was 4,740.
Moreover
, the average
distance
for all
modes
of transportation increased except for walking, bicycle, and local bus in 2000. In both 1985 and 2000, the car was the most used mode with almost three-quarters of the total average.
Moreover
, local buses and other
modes
of
travel
contribute to almost 20% of the average
distance
. Train and walking contribute 289 and 255 respectively. On the one hand, the three lowest
modes
of
travel
which are bicycle, local bus, and taxi show less than 55 miles. Regarding the average
distance
in 2000, it still has an average of total all
modes
is 6,475. Other
modes
of
travel
showed the second most used
travel
, rising from 450 to 585, followed by train, local bus, and walking. Interestingly, the data shows similar trends in both years despite the changes in all
modes
of transportation.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words modes, travel, distance with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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