The pie charts give information about 4 different products (Cotton,Wheat,Vegetable,Fruit)which exported in Uzbekistan between 2012 and 2018.

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The pie chart above shows the amount of exported products in Uzbekistan between 2012 and 2018 in percentages. It involves four major products

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wheat, fruits, vegetables, and and cotton. As we can see, the least exported commodities are coir, oil palm and millet, in which all three of them are in 2%.

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the most exported commodities here

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up to 32% during these six years. Meanwhile, one specific commodity

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stated in the chart that reaches the highest percentage is wheat, with 15% in total. Following the total exports of wheat, we can see rice (13%) and corn (10%)

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. From here, we can conclude that the top three

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commodities exported in Uzbekistan during 2012 and 2018 are the main food supplies or food sources.

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Feb 13, 2024

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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134 words

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The pie charts give information about 4 different products (Cotton,Wheat,Vegetable,Fruit)which exported in Uzbekistan between 2012 and 2018.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

xIn some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

people tend to move to rural areas, on the other hand, a decrease in population in the countryside has a problem

The company you work has decided to close the cafeteria, as the staff is not using it much. You are not happy with the decision. Write a letter to the director. -Give reason of low usage -How will it affect the staff -Suggest ways to improve it

Some people say that what children is their behaviour. other leave the amount of time they spend on television influences their behaviour most. Discuss both views and give your opinion.