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The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of men and women academic staff members across 7 different major
universities
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university
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 faculties in 2012.
overall
, the
avrege
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average
 of
male
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males
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showed
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was
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highest
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 than women.
However
, men enrolled
engineering
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in engineering
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 more than women,
while
famale prefered
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families preferred
 education. To
begein
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begin
, the percentage of males
were
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 85% and
famale
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females
 18% in engineering.
In addition
, girls and boys enrolled
to
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 Arts by 58% and 42% respectively. There
was
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apply
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35% of
famale
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families
 and 62% of
male
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males
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 in
busniess
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business
,
while
 40% and 60% of girls and boys respectively signed in law. The
avareg
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average
 of
male
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males
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 in
scince
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science
 was 62% and 38% of
famle
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females
.
However
, there was 50% of
famle
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female
families
 in
medicin
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medicine
 and
male
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males
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 were less around 1%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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