With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered area of the world should be opened up to access more resourced. To what extent do you agree?

The world indeed is constantly experiencing an enormous demand

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oil and gas. Since these two natural

resources

cannot be maintained for a long time or forever, people on

earth

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should discover a sustainable

solution

. One

solution

that is

mostly being talked about is discovering new areas of the world that can be opened up to access and dig up more

resources

. First

thing

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first,

this

solution

is not

such

a sustainable one for the future. Exploring new places will end up in the same trouble again, which is the depletion of

resources

sooner or later. The expedition might take up some time and human

resources

, yet it cannot guarantee the result we are hoping for.

Not to mention

the myriad

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impact

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for

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the

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nature. Finding new spots to dig up some

resources

are

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alright by me, yet it should have its

limitation

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and

regulation

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.

While

the parties involved in

this

exploration working on

this

job, the government should think

another

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solution

that is

beneficial in the long run. In

this

case, I would be more supportive

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another alternative, which is investing in sustainable energy

such

as solar

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, wind panels, and many more. These novel energy sources

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not yet fully explored and implemented. One of the

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might be

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the high cost we need to produce

such

a technology for all.

However

, I still think it is better to build it up little by little rather than

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our pristine nature to find oil and gas. In a nutshell, I can support the discovery of new

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under some conditions and as long as it is not regarded as a final

solution

. I would rather vote for investment

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new

invention

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or research to stop

this

activity to create a healthy earth for all, for our generation and the generations afterwards.