The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs depict a comparison of the utilisation of electrical appliances in households and the total of spending
hours
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housework in one country from 1920 to 2019.
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on
Overall
, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners users increased dramatically Linking Words
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1920 until 2000, Change preposition
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while
washing machines fluctuated very slightly between 1960 and 2019. At the same time, Linking Words
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of Change the article
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the number
hours
every week for finished housework fell substantially in 99 years.
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To begin
, in 1920, no one in society used refrigerators compared to those who applied washing machines and vacuum cleaners, accounting for 40% and 30%, respectively. Linking Words
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, from 1940 to 1980, washing appliances skyrocketed surpassing both equipment for a total of 100%, trailed by dustbusters with the same peak percentage in 2000 till the end of the period. Washing machines, Linking Words
on the other hand
, have a moderate Linking Words
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, reaching a peak of just above 70% in 2019.
In the first year (1920), Replace the word
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hours
per week for finished housework was the longest, namely 50 Use synonyms
hours
. After that, the times dropped sequentially to 15 Use synonyms
hours
until 1980 and remained stable for the next 20 years, Use synonyms
then
reached the lowest rate at 10 Linking Words
hours
in 2019.Use synonyms
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