The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrate

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the ten

countries

of

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with

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the

higher

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in

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the

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production and consumption of

electricity

in 2014.

General

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way, we can see that China took

first

place in

production

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the production

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and consumption of

electricity

,

in addition

, the second country is United

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, took second place and was almost a

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percentage than the

first

.

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Firstly

, the most noticeable that the

first

and second

countries

do not have a big difference between them,

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, between other

countries

were

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slowly

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.

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, Russia came in third place and was 80% lower in

produced

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production

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and

consumped

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consumption

of

electricity

compation

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compared

of

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the

first

group,

moreover

, other

the

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countries

gradually

decrease

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by 10%, respectively and

finaly

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finally

Korea ranks

last

in

electricity

production and consumption.