Nowadays, most children prefer to spend several hours playing with electronic devices over doing more traditional leisure activities. What problem does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions?

Play and enjoyment are an integral part of growing

children

. Nowadays,

majority

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the majority

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of the

children

spent

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spend

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their playing

time

on electronic

devices

more than local games. Many problems are resulting

due to

this

trend. In

this

essay, we discuss the causes and some solutions to

this

problem.

Firstly

,

children

lose their health.

While

they

use

electronic

devices

like phones and video games, they do not

use

physical effort. In earlier days, kid are playing with their friends in front of the house and exposure to the soil will gain immunity to them. So, they have enough immunity power to resist diseases and their muscles are very strong.

Instead

, people

use

non-physical games having no physical power to resist the germs. Eventually, it affects the muscles and getting sick very easily.

Also

, the long-term screen affects the vision and power of the eyes.

Secondly

, they lose their

sportsman spirit

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sportsmanship

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. Before the invention of the internet and other social

medias

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media

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like television and phones, they used their leisure

time

with

variety

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a variety

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of

activities

. The team playing and the team spirit help develop their physical and

moreover

their mental health too. They are able to adapt to failures and accept challenges of the daily life. Unfortunately, the new generations are trying an easy way to succeed.

Therefore

, they get depressed and think negatively easily when facing a problem. Recently, the newspaper reported that a student attempted

to

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suicide

due to

a low mark in the final exam. The phone and computers are the essential part of our life. We cannot instruct them to avoid them more than, we can teach and train the

children

to

use

the

devices

properly.

Also

, encourage them to

spent

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spend

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time

with their friends and

also

be involved in

activities

at home like cleaning and washing. Try different types of entertaining

activities

like travel, exercise and clubs. These are the possible solutions for keeping away

children

from electronic

devices

.

To conclude

, there are problems and solutions for every problem. Support the students to

use

their free

time

for physical

activities

and other types of enjoyment rather than

an electronic

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electronic devices

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devices

.