Nowadays, most children prefer to spend several hours playing with electronic devices over doing more traditional leisure activities. What problem does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions?

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their playing

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on electronic

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more than local games. Many problems are resulting

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,

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lose their health.

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they

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electronic

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like phones and video games, they do not

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physical effort. In earlier days, kid are playing with their friends in front of the house and exposure to the soil will gain immunity to them. So, they have enough immunity power to resist diseases and their muscles are very strong.

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non-physical games having no physical power to resist the germs. Eventually, it affects the muscles and getting sick very easily.

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, the long-term screen affects the vision and power of the eyes.

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, they lose their

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. Before the invention of the internet and other social

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like television and phones, they used their leisure

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of

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. The team playing and the team spirit help develop their physical and

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their mental health too. They are able to adapt to failures and accept challenges of the daily life. Unfortunately, the new generations are trying an easy way to succeed.

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, they get depressed and think negatively easily when facing a problem. Recently, the newspaper reported that a student attempted

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suicide

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a low mark in the final exam. The phone and computers are the essential part of our life. We cannot instruct them to avoid them more than, we can teach and train the

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to

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the

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properly.

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, encourage them to

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time

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with their friends and

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be involved in

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at home like cleaning and washing. Try different types of entertaining

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like travel, exercise and clubs. These are the possible solutions for keeping away

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from electronic

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, there are problems and solutions for every problem. Support the students to

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their free

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for physical

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and other types of enjoyment rather than

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devices

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