Nowdays, many people have to work long time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What employers can do to make their life easier?
Nowadays,many
people
have to Use synonyms
work
longer periods and Use synonyms
this
leads them to feel more stress than before.In the next paragraph,I will discuss the reason behind Linking Words
this
and what employers can do to make their Linking Words
life
easier.
First,one of the main reasons is the costs of living have surged in Fix the agreement mistake
lives
this
modern era.Linking Words
Therefore
,individuals tend to take on multiple jobs to Linking Words
fulfill
their needs.Change the spelling
fulfil
For example
housing,a lot of Linking Words
people
need extra salaries to pay for their house rental or else they don't have a place to sleep and rest.Eventually,Use synonyms
this
increases a Linking Words
person
stress levels because of the workload,Change noun form
person's
as a result
,an unwanted stress-related illness will occur.Linking Words
However
,the manager can try to raise wages for those who are working overtime and introduce wellness programs or workshops on time and stress management to their worker because Linking Words
this
will help them Linking Words
to
manage time properly and release tension.
Second,cultural developments Verb problem
apply
also
play a significant role Linking Words
on
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in
people
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to
becoming more successful in their lives.Change preposition
apply
For example
,status and social media haveLinking Words
a
negative influence in Add a missing verb
had a
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this
recent years,making Correct determiner usage
apply
people
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to
buy branded items to show off.Change the verb form
apply
Consequently
,the public will undergo hours and hours of Linking Words
work
to satisfy their needs.In the end,a bad impact on their health.Use synonyms
Therefore
,the government and private sector can Linking Words
try
make an effort to publish awareness campaigns on the usage of social media to the public,Add the particle
try to
thus
,Linking Words
this
will gain consciousness among the public about the internet community.
In conclusion,every part of the world Linking Words
have
experienced the same things because all human Change the verb form
has
have
to Change the verb form
has
work
and Use synonyms
fulfill
their needs.Change the spelling
fulfil
However
, there are Linking Words
also
several solutions to conquer the problem.In my opinion,it is important for us to Linking Words
work
as a team.Use synonyms
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