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Questions • Give details of the course you took at the university • Explain why you recommend the university • Give some advice about how to apply.

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Dear Malika The course hall of the
university
 where I studied is very wonderful. All the facilities are there for your study and each area has its own teacher, leader and knowledge. I especially like the learning process. Because it interests and directs each student to his field. You can even teach in your free time. There are too many empty rooms. I hope you like it. If you liked the information in the course of the
university
 I studied, I recommend that you study at his
university
. You will never regret it.
Such
 a
university
 and
such
 a course do not exist anywhere else I will write down a phone number, home address and some information on a piece of paper for
you
Change the pronoun
your
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 reference. Definitely apply.
Correct the word
Yours
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Your
Correct your spelling
Yours
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 sincerely Mokhinur
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Introduction
Begin with a clear introduction to your topic, briefly outlining the points you plan to discuss. This helps the reader understand what to expect from your essay.
Conclusion
End your essay with a conclusion that summarizes the main points you've discussed and restates your recommendation in a compelling way.
Logical Structure
Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea, with sentences that logically support that idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas and paragraphs.
Specific Examples
While discussing experiences or recommendations, be sure to include specific details or examples to support your points. This makes your argument more compelling.
Complete Response
Address all parts of the task directly and provide a clear, detailed response to each. Make sure your essay clearly explains why you recommend the university and offers specific advice on applying.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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