The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart explains the variation in
percentage
of individuals Add an article
the percentage
were
born inside and outside Correct pronoun usage
who were
Austaralia
who lived in urban, Correct your spelling
Australia
countryside
and town areas
in the period between 1995 to 2010. Overall
, the chart illustrates that ther
is a slight increase for people who live in cities, Correct your spelling
there
while
there is a gradual decrease for those who live in towns
and countryside
during the examined period. Correct article usage
the countryside
Moreover
, citizens
who Change preposition
for citizens
born
outside Australia during that period, there Add a missing verb
were born
is
a gradual increase Wrong verb form
was
for
cities and a decrease rate for Change preposition
in
towns
and countryside
areas
.
In 1995, the figures shows
that 60 Change the verb form
show
percent
of citizens Change the spelling
per cent
born
outside Australia Add a missing verb
were born
for
cities area, Change preposition
in
while
40 percent
of Australian people Change the spelling
per cent
born
inside the country.
In 2010, there Add a missing verb
were born
is
a sharp increase in urban Wrong verb form
was
areas
, as the people
born outside was 80 Correct quantifier usage
number of people
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
those
born inside the rate was 40 Change preposition
for those
percent
. On Change the spelling
per cent
other
hand, the Correct article usage
the other
individuals
born inside Australia in the Correct quantifier usage
number of individuals
countryside
and towns
was 18 percent
, and those Change the spelling
per cent
who
Correct pronoun usage
apply
born
outside in Add a missing verb
were born
towns
and urban areas
ws
15% and 10% respectively.Correct your spelling
was
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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