In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. Some claim that this has negative effects on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often considered that

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number of countries replaced traditional

food

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items

by

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with

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junk meals. Many population

thinks

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that

this

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has

an adverse effects

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an adverse effect

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on families

as well as

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socities

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societies

.

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, I assent from the notion which

further

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leads to a logical conclusion. Commencing, there are various factors which

gives

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the evidence of unfavourable effects of

fashionalable

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fashionable

meals. First and foremost, these junk cuisines are much tastier but it's not good to eat on

daily

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basis because it can block our veins

as a consequence

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of

this

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is

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apply

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enhancement of disease to our body.

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, these junk foods are cooked

with

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apply

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using a great amount of unprocessed oil which is really detrimental

for

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to

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our

health

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although

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cuisines are not cooked in a clean place as well.

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, the 'Zee News' illustrates the dairy milk chocolate having worms creeping over the chocolate bar which is annoying to the public. Probing ahead, the junkies are only to make you ecstatic but not

conatining

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containing

any nutritional values compared to the traditional foods.

Stuffs

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Stuff

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which are prepared at home are full of vitamins and necessary

health

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benefits which everyone

require

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for a healthy lifestyle.

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, fast meals

serves

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cause

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a person to be fat and

additionally

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, full of

health

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issues rather than a happy life.

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, youths like gym freaks and film stars are

health

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concious

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conscious

which

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and

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always prefer to eat healthy diets. In a nutshell, the populace should eat international fast

food

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occasionally with limited

amount

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and after eating these foods, take a digestion drink which balances the nutritional values.

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of having fashionable

food

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, make your daily

food

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in

tastier

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a tastier

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manner.