Some people believe that the society should be based on rules and laws. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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publish

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has to follow regulations. I completely agree that

the

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society

need

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to

based

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on

laws

. On

field

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which

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laws

play a significant role is that of

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the number of

criminal

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.

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Evidence

for

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this

can be seen in the fact that there

are

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a lot of

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before without

strict

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a strict

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law system some of which

are

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heavily hurt others

whereas

now majorities

who

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might be quite angry but avoid

to break

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the

laws

because they would face

penalty

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and prison life if they break them. Luckily, these regulations build people's awareness of

consequences

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the consequences

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which are caused by their behaviours, greatly contributing to a safe community.

As a result

, when people feel they are in a

safey

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safe

atmosphere, they would more likely to

focues

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focus

on their jobs, studies and families.

Then

, it will

inprove

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improve

people's life

saitisfaction

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satisfaction

.

Consequently

, their quality of life will be improved as well. Apart from the safety

aspact

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aspect

aspects

, a number of business activities have

also

thrived under a

well-srtructure

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well-structured

well-structure

law country and

cooperations

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cooperation

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between companies have fully supported.

For instance

, based on business

laws

,

competitions

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between different brands can keep a healthy track, so

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it helps to build

a

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healthy marketing.

This

is

becuase

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because

if some companies break rules and gain short-term money, they will be punished by certain

laws

,

as well as

penalty

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may be higher than their profits.

Therefore

, most companies will follow

laws

to develop their businesses, which can help to form a strong

regulate

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regulated

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market, increasing business cooperation

oppertunities

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opportunities

, which can

also

improve the economy. In conclusion, regarding

of

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a

safety

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public environment and the

thrival

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thrill

economy mentioned above show that regulations are

necessoary

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necessary

for

a

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society

This

shows that the proposition that society should follow rules and

laws

is true.