The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The number of
society
living in urban areas in
different Change preposition
on
continents
are
illustrated Correct subject-verb agreement
is
through
the bar chart. As shown, the percentage of folks who Change preposition
in
lived
in urban Wrong verb form
live
place
Fix the agreement mistake
places
in
every Change preposition
on
continents
Change to a singular noun
continent
had
increased year by year.
Africa and Asia were Wrong verb form
has
lowest
Correct article usage
the lowest
continents
with society
living in Add an article
a society
Add an article
the city
city
below 20% in 1950, Fix the agreement mistake
cities
while
the rest of continents
had reached more than 35% of people who lived in a Correct article usage
the continents
development
environment. Replace the word
developing
However
the behavior
of Change the spelling
behaviour
society
changed, it showed that in 2007, the comunity
who stayed in Correct your spelling
community
township
had significantly Add an article
the township
grew
up to nearly a fourth for Africa and just over a Change the verb form
grown
forth
for Asia. Correct your spelling
fourth
Therefore
, it predicts in 2050, the population lives in metropolis
will reach more than Correct your spelling
metropolises
a
half.
Correct article usage
apply
furthermore
, In
Change preposition
On
west
side of the world, the data show the same trend which gradually rose. In 1950, Add an article
the west
society
who loved to spend their
rest of their life in Change the pronoun
the
township
Add an article
the township
were
around 40% to 60%, as time flies, Change the verb form
was
this
population went up to roughly a three quarter, and in the future, in 2050, Europe, Caribbean
, and North America will have nearly 90% to 90%, Correct article usage
the Caribbean
while
Oceanic will slightly climb to just over a three quarterSubmitted by angelhorta313 on
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