The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand from 1901 and its predicted year in 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The proffered line chart provides information about the
rates
of birth
and death changes in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Broadly, it is readily noticeable that the number of death
experienced a Fix the agreement mistake
deaths
significance
growth compared to the Replace the word
significant
birth
rates
which showed the the
downward trend in its projection.
In terms of Correct article usage
a
birth
rates
, it started at a fifth per cent at the beginning of the period,
and showed a fluctuation data between 1910 and 1931. Remove the comma
apply
In addition
, the rates
reported fast growth and peaked at approximately two-third
. It fluctuated but still Correct your spelling
two-thirds
contributing
a decrease, it is predicted to decline in 2101 Wrong verb form
contributed
about
45%.
Change preposition
by about
In contrast
, there was a huge improvement related to the birth
rates
. Nevertheless
, a slight fluctuation shown
from 1901 to 2001. Add a missing verb
was shown
Furthemore
, the trend plummeted and it is Correct your spelling
Furthermore
forcasted
to increase considerably in 2061. Interestingly, the Correct your spelling
forecasted
forecast
rates
of Birth
in New Zealand will be reported stable in percentage as it is predicted to be quite constant in 2101.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rates, birth with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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