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the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.the table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.the table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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Information is provided through a bar chart depicting the export earnings made in five different categories of a nation in the years 2015 and 2016.
In addition
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, a table illustrates the transformation in respective brackets from 2015 to 2016.
Overall
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 textiles and engineered products demonstrated a significant growth,
whereas
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 gems and jewellery had a steep decline during the surveyed period. Looking at the groups which had a larger amount of revenue, both engineered and petroleum products recorded profits of more than $55
billion
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 in 2015, with an 8.5% rise being represented in 2016 for the former category, as opposed to the left sizeable ratio of 3% for the latter one.
In contrast
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 gems and jewellery was the only category which experienced a negative percentage change in values during the two years. In 2015, the amount of export earnings was approximately $42
billion
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.
Thereafter
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, the figure slightly dropped to marginally over $40
billion
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 in the following year, which was equivalent to a 5.18% decline. Turning to the bands which had less export earnings, agricultural merchandise created just over $30
billion
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 in income in 2015, with the number remaining almost the same in 2016.
Conversely
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, textile recorded a considerable growth over the two years.
While
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 the value of exports in
this
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 category was only $26
billion
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 in 2015, the figure soared by 15.24%, standing in the vicinity of $30
billion
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 in 2016.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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