Today, people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on pp’s lives? To you agree or disagree

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has led

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about the negative effects

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people

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mindset

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caused by advertising. In my opinion, I agree that

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can

led

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to negative repercussions which

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overconsumer, potentially harmful

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problems later on in life. One serious problem that can arise from advertising is that overconsumer. Before

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advertise

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,

people

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frequently

buy

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something based on

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needs,

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, now they prefer to purchase anything because of the attraction.

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,

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will have high

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from expenditure on goods that are not utterly valuable. Overconsumer of

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kind is not healthy and sometimes

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to detrimental effects

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as depression, anxiety and other possible issues. Another issue is that surrounding

edvertisements

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advertisements

can be risky.

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an increasing amount of cybercrime,

people

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can assume fake

advertise

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online which is actually fraud to gain more money.

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is particularly concerning for teenagers who are

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impressionable

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easely

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be led into

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situation

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.

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, as

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interactioon

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is online, parents have no way of monitoring it and protecting their children.

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, advertising can end in difficulties years later because of the increasing demand and tax that should be paid which is

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consequency

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consequence

of watching

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much advertisement.

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situation is critical for many

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, again

especially

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for teenagers who do not

thing

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think

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critically before

purchase

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something just to follow the trend through the internet and in society.

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, many vulnerable children who are exposed

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promotion

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of unhealthy food will yearn to always eat the food and

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desire can lead to

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effect later of obesity In conclusion ,

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advertising goods and others

has

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become more popular for

people

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nowadays, I believe that it

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has brought about too many problems for society.