Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with the academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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that says it is good for students to learn handy

skills

beside with

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theoritical

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theoretical

subjects

in their education process in

schools

. I firmly disagree with

this

notion, and limited free

time

, the more

improtant

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important

subjects

, and

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the susptibility

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susptibility

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susceptibility

to damage themselves are my underlying reasons. Nowadays

schools

play a crucial role in children’s future, so well

mangement

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management

of

schools

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curicula

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curricula

curriculum

is vital. it is obvious that the school

curriculm

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curriculums

around the world has limited free

time

,

in other

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schools

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timetable

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will not allow us to put practical

skills

in their

curicula

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curricula

curriculum

.

in addition

, there are many other

subjects

which have more importance than practical

skills

.

for example

, learning about a healthy lifestyle can be much more beneficial than

learnig

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learning

cars

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maintenance.

moreover

, obviously

schools

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children are teenagers who are spending their

clamsy

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calm

phase.

Thus

,

due to

the phase, if we make them learn handy

skills

, we will

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them to harm themselves,

besides

damaging learning tools.

On the other hand

, there are some people who claim that these

kind

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of

skills

are useful for their future. They can find their talents through

schools

, improve those talents, and become a

skillful

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person in the field where they

liked

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.

Also

, these

skills

are needed for every society, so if they can not achieve success in academic backgrounds, practical

skills

will give them another chance to make a living.

However

, these

skills

could be easily gained in their spare

time

with

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supervising

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of their parents without any pressure of the limited

time

or harm. In conclusion, I strongly believe that

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to

constraints

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the constraints

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of

school

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the school

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timetable, other vital

subjects

to learn, and prone to harm it is not

benefical

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beneficial

for pupils to learn handy

skills

along with

academic

subjects

in

the

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school.