Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians and sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other type of Job should be highly paid?

Certain individuals believe that people working in the

entertainment

industry are overpaid.

For instance

, pop singers, movie personalities, and sports stars are generally paid high for each project they undertake,

additionally

, they make even more money via promotional campaigns and

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sales.

Whereas

, essential

workers

such

as

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nurses

and

police

officers

are greatly underpaid

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their efforts.

Hence

, I wish to agree

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the captioned notion.

To begin

with, celebrities in the

entertainment

industry have

multiples

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sources of income via their main job,

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enables them to be paid generously. Apart from their main projects, most celebrities are involved in carrying out multiple promotional activities

due to

their popularity.

This

includes selling products under their name

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and associating with specific brands to improve

the

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brand recognition.

This

enables them to earn even more in their line of

work

,

furthermore

, people working as entertainers have the liberty of demanding their designed pay for the projects they take up.

For example

, an article published by

billboard music

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stated that, from the year 2021 to 2023 most of the pop singers earn a minimum of 1 million USD only via brand endorsements, which is just a fraction

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their total income.

Hence

, it is evident that

entertainment

artists are overpaid.

On the other hand

, certain medical

workers

such

as

nurses

and government

workers

such

as

police

officers

are not paid enough considering the time, and effort they put in. Individuals who

work

as

police

officers

and healthcare

nurses

have extremely stressful jobs as they are constantly handling critical conditions. They are expected to be on call when ungently required, and they are

also

expected to

work

on public holidays.

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they are not paid enough for the amount of

work

they do.

For instance

, in the

U.S

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U.S.

healthcare

nurses

on

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average make about 2500-3000 USD per month excluding taxes.

Thus

, I believe that individuals involved in

such

jobs should

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better pay. In conclusion, entertainers have the option of demanding and setting a pay they are comfortable with, and they are able to use their celebrity status to make even more money by marketing their name.

Whereas

, some essential

workers

like

nurses

and

police

officers

are overworked and underpaid.

Hence

,

this

writer is of the firm opinion that

entertainment

workers

mainly pop singers,

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and sports celebrities are extremely overpaid.