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The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
#information #travel #uk #countries #residents #visit #summarise #features #comparisons
The line graph illustrates the number of
traveler
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travelers
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 visiting
UK
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the UK
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 from abroad and
travel
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travelling
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 overseas from
UK
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the UK
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 between 1979 and 1999.
Overall
, both visitors to
UK
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the UK
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 and
UK
 residents
to
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apply
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overseas
shows
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show
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 an upward trend during the period of
20years
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20 years
. In detail,
a
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the
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 number of
travelers
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travellers
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 from
UK
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the UK
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was
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were
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 slightly higher than foreigners to
UK
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the UK
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. Both of them
incraesed
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increased
 gradually by 1989 for
similar
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a similar
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 amount.
However
,
UK
 residents
shows
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show
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 significant growth
in
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from
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 1984 to 1999.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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