The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the life cycle of a salmon and

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cycles have 3 phases,starting from the eggs to mature salmons. First,the eggs will be laid at

upper

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the upper

an upper

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river which is slower in flow.The egg will

be hid

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be hidden

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on the reeds and stones for 5 to 6 months before forming into a fry which

are

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3 to 8 centimetres long.The fry moves to

lower

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the lower

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river to stay for 4 years before growing into smolt.The smolt with 12 to 15 centimetres length will migrate to

open

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the open

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sea and

growing

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grow

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into

a

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adult salmon.The adult salmons will live in the open sea

approximately

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5 years before mating season .

overall

,the lifespan of a salmon

needs

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almost 10 years before it

start

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over again.