In many countries, imprisonment is the most common solution to crime. However, some people believe that better education will be effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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passing time. People who are included in

this

are sent to the

jail

. Ergo, it is believed that sending these people behind

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bars is the common solution to

crime

.

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, many believe

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better literature can be an effective solution towards

this

case. I completely agree with the given notion , that by giving them proper knowledge the

crime

rate can be brought down.

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supportive ideas.

To begin

with,

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even though

sending them to

Jail

is the most

affective

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way to reduce

crime

, they should be

also

provided

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knowledge, to avoid

further

mistake

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. If someone has

made

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a

crime

, unless harming

other person

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. The first thing that the high official should do is captivate them under officers and

than

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after they should be provided the right information regarding the laws under supervision,

For Instance

, In India

Crime

rate is high, but on the other side those who are not involved in bigger

crime

, they are sent to the Government institutions where they are taught the right thing and enhance their skills by getting engaged in new activities.

Moreover

, Sending these people

straightforward

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in

jail

is not a good idea.

Instead

, of

this

the Police officers should ask

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reason behind the

crime

to the criminal. If they are

commited

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committed

to a serious

crime

,

than

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they should be punished. By doing so, we can help those who are in need or

for

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who have

done

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this

mistake forcefully. To Prove it, Dubai is considered to be the safest city in

term

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of

crime

and terror. It is known that even after committing a

crime

the prisoners are given

chance

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to improvise their

mistake

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exceptional for those with harsh

crime

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crimes

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.

To conclude

,

Although

sending them to

jail

is the accurate step towards

the

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perfection, they should be

also

taught the right thing. By doing so each country can minimize their

crime

issue rate for current

as well as

for upcoming

generation

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.