bar graph about the average weekly spending by families. Describe it.

bar graph about the average weekly spending by families. Describe it.
Depicted in the bar graph is data about the average weekly spending by families. The data compares the observations between 1968 and 2008.
Furthermore
, the data was categorised
in
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8 categories which are food, housing, fuel and power, clothing and footwear, household
goods
, personal
goods
, transport, and leisure.
Overall
, the highest
percent
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of weekly income spent by families in 1968 was food with approximately 35%.
On the other hand
, the highest percentage in 2018 was leisure with nearly a quarter
percent
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per cent
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.
Moreover
,
food
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the food
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itself experienced a downfall in 2018, with more than
15
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%
different
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. The other
category
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categories
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that experienced a decrease
was
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were
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fuel and power, clothing and footwear, and personal
goods
. Another noteworthy aspect is the categories that had an increase, which
was
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were
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housing, transport, and leisure.
Furthermore
, the
percent
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of weekly income spent by families on household
goods
between 1968 and 2008 remained the same with slightly less than 10%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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