The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts compare the total expenses of a selected local
government
on several nine different aspects in 2010 and 2015.
Generally, the local government
reduced their expenditures on almost aspects
. Meanwhile, only only few of them Correct determiner usage
all aspects
that
either had a slight growth or Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
same proportion from Correct article usage
the
previous
year.
Add an article
the previous
Initially
, the local government
allocated 24% from
their revenues for education purposes, Change preposition
of
however
, it reduced to 21% a decade later. A similar trend also
occurred in terms of defence matters, as the income only
designated for 14% Add a missing verb
was only
Change preposition
at
in
the end of the period, from its initial 17%. Even though the expenses for healthcare provisions had a slight decrease by one Change preposition
at
percent
, it still became the second prioritized aspect in both years. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, the apportion to
the cultural and recreational activities Change preposition
apply
as well as
transports, only reached 2% and 3%, respectively, at the beginning of the period and hit equally one percent
in the later year, which made them the smallest Change the spelling
per cent
spendings
.
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
On the other hand
, interest in borrowing and welfare were
both obtained less budget from the local Unnecessary verb
apply
government
for only less than ten percent
in 2010, which doubled ten years later to 10% and 13%, respectively. Meanwhile, the squanderings for pensions and other purposes were steady throughout the given period.Change the spelling
per cent
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