some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things .other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. discuss both views and give your own opinion
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,Advertisement
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Advertisements
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have
day
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day-to-day
life
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lives
people
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suggests the
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need
.It helps the Fix the agreement mistake
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products
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people
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products
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ambassadors
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a brand
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ambassador
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of their
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products
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people
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coherence cohesion
Ensure your essay has a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The introduction should present the topic and your thesis statement. The body paragraphs should discuss each view separately and then your own opinion. Finally, conclude by summarizing the discussion and reaffirming your opinion.
coherence cohesion
Work on improving the logical structure of your essay by clearly separating it into paragraphs, each dedicated to a distinct idea or argument. Use transition words to connect ideas and paragraphs smoothly.
task achievement
Focus on answering all parts of the task. Discuss both views presented in the prompt equally before giving your own opinion. Make sure your own perspective is clear and well-supported.
task achievement
To enhance task achievement, ensure your ideas are clear and comprehensive. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea, supported by relevant examples and explanations.
task achievement
Use specific examples to support your arguments. While you've provided some examples, aim to use them more effectively by clearly explaining how they support your viewpoint or the view you're discussing.
coherence cohesion
Review for grammatical errors and typos, as they can distract from your argument and make your essay less coherent. Consider engaging in additional practice with grammar and vocabulary to enhance your writing skills.