A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages •say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear John
I am so glad to hear that you are going to go
for
a camping holiday in the summerChange preposition
on
,
and Remove the comma
apply
also
thank you for taking advice from me.I hope you spend this
summer with enjoyable memories
I can say that you will quite wallow it.You should go for
camping because Change preposition
apply
i
had a great camping experience. One of the great opportunities Change the capitalization
I
you can
take a long Verb problem
is to
walking
in the wilderness and green nature.You can Replace the word
walk
also
go to a nearby lake for fishing or swimming which you have always want
to do.But the best thing about Change the verb form
wanted
this
camping holiday will be that it will actually improve your mood.On the other hand
, the are some drawbacks,such
as bad weather and dealing with dangerous animals and harmful insects.
To be honestly
with you, if I have a chance Change the word
honest
i
will go Change the capitalization
I
to
Change preposition
apply
the
camping with you, But Correct article usage
apply
this
summer i
am going to Change the capitalization
I
the
London with my parents for their anniversary.I wish you Correct article usage
apply
memorable
holiday
Take care and stay fine.
Your sincerity
AkbarshohAdd an article
a memorable
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task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the prompt in a balanced manner. While your letter touches on all the suggested points, expanding on each point with more depth and examples could enhance your task response.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of cohesive devices (e.g., furthermore, however) to link ideas within and between paragraphs more smoothly. This will improve the flow of your letter and make your points clearer.
coherence cohesion
Try to maintain a clear paragraph structure with a distinct opening and closing sentence for each paragraph. This helps in presenting your ideas more coherently and makes your letter easier to follow.
coherence cohesion
Revise for minor grammatical errors and ensure that verb tenses are consistent throughout your letter. Paying attention to these details can improve the overall readability and professionalism of your writing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite