The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant.
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The bar charts illustrate the usage of
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water
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three different purposes namely domestic,industrial and agricultural in six different areas with instruments in percentages.
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To begin
with,there are six countries like Afica
,Central Correct your spelling
Africa
Asia
,South East Asia
,Europe
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and Europe
last
one are
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north
America as mentioned above.Most of the countries use Capitalize word
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water
for agricultural purposes such
as Central Asia
with 88%,South East Asia
with 81% and Afica
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Africa
American71
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America71
In contrast
,domestic and idustrial
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industrial
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less than 7% .As seen from the charts,in North Change preposition
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American
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America
Europe
,industrials consume more water
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48 and 53%.Fix the agreement mistake
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Finally
,both Europe
and North American
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America
water
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domestic and agricultural purposes with no more than 40% and less than 12%.
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Overall
,most water
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is consumed
arigricultural
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agricultural
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such
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Africa
Asia
, South East Asia
and South American
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America
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and Europe
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preferred
water
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developments
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development
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