The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The pie charts give information about the proportion of three different kinds of nutrients in ordinary meals, all of them could
harm
if used extremely.
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be harmful
Overall
, it can be seen that all the mentioned nutrients could be found more in dinner, except for added sugar
. In addition
, breakfast contained a lower level of Sodium
, Saturated fat and Added Sugar
in it.
Looking at the detail
, by eating dinner about 43% Fix the agreement mistake
details
sodium
entered our body, while
it just contained 23% added sugar
. By consuming Lunch we only added
approximately 29% Wrong verb form
add
Sodium
and 26% Saturated fat to our bodies and it also
contained
just 19% Added Wrong verb form
contains
sugar
.
With respect to breakfast, it is noticible
that the lower amounts of nutrients Correct your spelling
noticeable
allocated
to it. The calculated Add a missing verb
are allocated
percentage
for Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
Sodium
, Saturated fat and Added sugar
are 14, 16 and 16 per cent, respectitively
. Turning to snacks, they just include 14% Correct your spelling
respectively
Sodium
, while
a huge amount of added sugar
(42%) found
in them.Add a missing verb
is found
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