In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Although

human

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made lots of

agriculture

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agricultural

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achievements nowadays,there are still numerous

people

still suffer from

hungry

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. There are many reasons why

this

situation will happen.but steps can definitely

be take

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to tackle

this

global problem. In my opinion, 3 main factors can cause

this

situation .

Firstly

, the imbalance of wealth distribution, which

cause

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class polarization. The minority

people

hold

a

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plenty of wealth

while

the others suffer from poverty and starvation.

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factors

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were

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to blame for

government

. Apart

for

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citizen

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citizens

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themselves,

government

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also

has the

responsible

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for

citizen's

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citizens'

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happiness or

give

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them

the

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fundamental social security so that they

could

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live better. But some

government

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governments

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failed to do that or have no recognition to do.

Finally

,

low

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agricultural production rate

also

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an

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significant factor to blame for, especially for developing

counties

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countries

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In these countries, their agricultural level are too low to feed all the

citizen

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citizens

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,

that's

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why some

people

are still

go

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hungry. But

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this

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problems could be

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improve

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. I believe that

government

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the government

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should take steps to tackle it.

For example

, publish some useful policy which can offer more Too opportunities to the poor so that they can feed themselves and get rid of starvation.

Furthermore

,

government

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the government

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could

also

adjust the revenue.

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this

way not only

government

encourage more

people

to devote themselves to agriculture, but

also

improve

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the

inbalance

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imbalance

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of wealth distribution. At the same time, the rich,

such

as businessmen or merchants,

also

have the social

responsibilities

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responsibility

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to tackle

this

problem. They need to donate some of their

financial

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finances

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to

the

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apply

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poor areas

,

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or establish some charities to improve poor

person’s

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people’s

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living

standard

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standards

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. In conclusion, the poor will continue to suffer from starvation unless the

government

, the rich and other relevant

people

cooperate to cope with

this

problem.