The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
The illustration shows two pie charts which have
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detailed information about Correct article usage
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the nutritions
nutritions
of two different Fix the agreement mistake
nutrition
typs
of food. Correct your spelling
types
Overall
, it appears that except Change preposition
for the
the
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for the
carbohydrat
and Correct your spelling
carbohydrate
carbohydrates
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the
saturated fat, the medium baked potato has more amount of Correct article usage
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the
nutritional consistency than the Correct article usage
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macaroni
.
Medium baked potato is more nutritious based on the ratio of some factors. Having 15% of the protein, this
meal is slightly overcome the macaroni
with the 11% of protein. Moreover
, the macaroni
has unconsiderably less percentage of the glocose
and the other nutrients.
The Correct your spelling
glucose
macaroni
, on the other hand
, consists of significant
amount of basic values. Correct article usage
a significant
For instance
, consuming the
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macaroni
bring
52% Correct subject-verb agreement
brings
carbohydrat
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carbohydrate
carbohydrates
while
the other dinner has just about 35% of it. Likewise
, the
saturated fat has Correct article usage
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substantial
rate in Correct article usage
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this
type of food with the exact number of 21%.Submitted by momenzade.mahna1999 on
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