Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with a friend. He/She has just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank him/her for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Jay,
Hope you are doing well. It was a great
time
spending
with you for the holiday. I am writing Wrong verb form
spent
this
letter for thanking
you, that you have captured those memories into a picture and letting me have an Change preposition
to thank
accomodation
at your place.
Let me tell you in detail. It was a good Correct your spelling
accommodation
time
as we had fun and stayed together after so long. Nevertheless
, after getting our field jobs it was difficult to spare a
Correct article usage
apply
time
and get some break, specially
in my case. After making all the arrangements, Replace the word
especially
Correct pronoun usage
I
it
was grateful that you allowed me to stay over there with you. After Correct pronoun usage
I
spending
a great Verb problem
having
time
, when i
came back to my home, Change the capitalization
I
i
was totally tired for a couple of days and had spent Change the capitalization
I
my
most Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
in
sleeping and because of Change preposition
apply
it
Add a comma
it,
i
got late to Change the capitalization
I
mail
you.
It would be great, if you Wrong verb form
mailing
come
here and Wrong verb form
came
give
me an opportunity to present my hospitality skills Wrong verb form
gave
with
you. After Change preposition
to
all
you have never visited my city. Add a comma
all,
In
the upcoming festival, Change preposition
For
i
think you should come here so that we can celebrate it together and Change the capitalization
I
also
i
will show you my new Change the capitalization
I
appartment
.
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours Faithful
Jay ChawlaCorrect your spelling
apartment
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Task Response
To improve your score in the task response category, make sure to directly address all parts of the prompt. Ensure that your letter is structured in a way that each section (thanking for the photos and holiday, explaining why you didn't write earlier, and the invitation) is distinctly tackled. While you've covered these points, elaborating a bit more on specific memories shared during the stay could make your response more complete.
Coherence and Cohesion
Regarding coherence and cohesion, strive for a more coherent flow of ideas by enhancing transitions between paragraphs. Aim for smoother transitions that naturally lead the reader from one idea to the next. This will significantly boost the logical structure of your letter. Additionally, try to start and close your letter in a more conventional or expected manner for this type of correspondence, which will improve your score in greeting and closing.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,