You are planning a week-long vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor and tell them that you are going away. In your letter, you should: - ask them to take care of your house; - explain why you will be away.
Dear Mr Mehta,
I am writing
this
letter in order to request a
help from you. As the festive season Remove the article
apply
are
Change the verb form
is
on-going
and Correct your spelling
ongoing
therfore
Correct your spelling
therefore
i
got a vacation from my job. I have decided to visit my village by Change the capitalization
I
this
time
. It would be great if you can
look after my house, by the Wrong verb form
could
time
i
am away. It would be much appreciated if you Change the capitalization
I
agree
on Wrong verb form
agreed
this
.
Let me elaborate in detail. It's been almost a couple of year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
i
haven'Change the capitalization
I
t
visited my village. However
, i
think that Change the capitalization
I
this
is the best time
for me to go there and spend time
with my family. It would be helpful if you take care of my accomodation
till Correct your spelling
accommodation
i
return. I just live Change the capitalization
I
to
next door, and Change preposition
apply
fortunately
there is no barrier wall which Add a comma
fortunately,
seperate
our Correct your spelling
separate
accomodation
from each other, so you don'Correct your spelling
accommodation
t
even have to move far away to take care.
It
would be grateful if you agreed on Correct pronoun usage
I
this
matter. I have turned off the whole meter of my house, and in order to get access to it, the box is just on right
to the entry gate. I have Correct article usage
the right
made
all the necessary precautions, so you don'Verb problem
taken
t
have to worry a lot. If you want, you can stay in
my house or do your own chores Change preposition
at
overthere
, it won'Correct your spelling
over there
t
be any
issue Correct determiner usage
an
to
me.
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours Change preposition
for
Sincererly
Jay ChawlaCorrect your spelling
Sincerely
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Task Achievement
Ensure clarity and precision in your request by directly stating what actions you wish your neighbor to take in looking after your house. Examples could include watering plants, checking mail, or ensuring security.
Task Achievement
Work on developing a more formal and polite tone throughout your letter. Phrases such as 'I am writing to request your help' and using 'would' instead of 'will' can make your request sound more polite and respectful.
Coherence and Cohesion
Enhance the logical structure by organizing your letter into clear paragraphs with distinct purposes. Starting with an introductory paragraph, followed by the main body explaining your absence and ending with a concluding paragraph that summarizes your requests and expresses gratitude.
Coherence and Cohesion
Improve paragraph cohesion by linking ideas more smoothly and using a variety of linking words. You can also use pronouns effectively to refer back to previously mentioned ideas, making the text flow better.