The chart below shows the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts compare the percentage of British university students who were able to speak a foreign
language
in 2000 and 2010.
To begin
with, the percentage of those who spoke Spanish increased during
the years, Change preposition
over
whereas
the popularity for
French decreased. Change preposition
of
Moreover
, the proportion of students who did not know another language
, apart from their native one, declined, respresenting
the growing interest of students Correct your spelling
representing
to
other languages Change preposition
in
during
the years.
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over
To begin
, 35% of individuals could communicate in Spanish in 2010, compared to 2000, at 30%, representing the highest precentage
in the charts. Following that, the proportion for those who could interact in another Correct your spelling
percentage
language
had increased form
15% (2000) to 20% (2010).
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On the other hand
, the proportion for
French speakers had dropped from 15% to 10% by 2010, Change preposition
of
as well as
for those who only used their own language
from 20% to 10% in the same years. Additionally
, the statistics were unchanged for the learners who could talked
in German and two other languages, at 10% in 2000 and 2010.Change the verb form
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