The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The provided bar chart depicts the total
production
and consumption
of electricity
in ten major countries
in
three different continents throughout the year 2014. These figures are measured in billion Change preposition
on
kWh
.
Overall
, China was the highest producer and consumer while
Korea was the least among all those countries
. However
, electricity
consumption
in Germany outnumbered its production
.
To begin
with, China took the lead as the biggest producer among all countries
, the supply of electricity
stood at 5.398 kWh
while
the demand was at 5.322 kWh
. On the other hand
, the US took the second chart, by producing 4.099 kWh
and consuming 3.866 kWh
. For other countries
, their production
and consumption
were under a thousand kWh
and followed the same pattern with
the top two Change preposition
as
countries
, where production
is higher than consumption
. Conversely
, only Germany produced less electricity
than its
consumed. Correct pronoun usage
it
Subsequently
, Korea’s electricity
production
and consumption
were on the last
chart, being ten-fold lower than China’s.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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