“The only way to improve road safety is to have stricter punishments for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

It is stated that applying stricter fines and penalties is the only solution to secure safety on the road. It is the writer’s

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that it is not the sole option as more efficacious solutions are available to minimize the hidden dangers for participants. It is crucial to comprehend that reckless driving is not only an attribute to increasing fatalities and danger on

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depends on the quality of the streets and highways. In crowded zones, streets are damaged detrimentally

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as a high frequency of

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occurs for a long period,

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, increasing accident risk, congestion and black spots

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by dint of wide holes and permanent marks made of

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bad phenomenon.

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, it is advisable for governments and local councils to raise more funding for transport infrastructure. Another basic point to mention is outdated Highway

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and other

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transportation

policies. With the

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of new vehicle models and the changing traffic trends, many accidents occurred for the reason that old rules and regulations are no longer to operate properly

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time.

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, it is of the utmost importance that government and local councils should

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update the Highway Code to suit with latest states and situations. Having enumerated the given reasons, it is undeniable that

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stricter bans and fines have been playing one of the most important roles in keeping the status stable as reckless driving, speeding,

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driving are

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the most popular causes

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accidents. Putting stricter punishments is essential for violators to change their attitudes and behaviours positively to help traffic flow safer.

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, it is not effective enough to solve all problems

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accident risk and

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as accidents come from numerous causes

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can be listed as poor street states, illogical traffic light

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…

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,

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various solutions simultaneously in order to prevent it in all aspects can give the best result. In conclusion, more options

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as improving streets, transport infrastructure and

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the Highway Code are recommended to

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with

punish

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street violators.

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, putting stricter penalties is not the only solution to prevent

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detrimental problem.