The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The provided bar charts depict the average proportion of three nutrients namely sodium, saturated fats and added

sugar

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in typical meals of the USA. These three kinds of nutrients are considered as unhealthy if they are overconsumed.

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, the proportion of sodium and saturated fat is the highest when it comes to

dinner

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while

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the share of

sugar

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during snack

time

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is the biggest one.

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with, sodium accounts for 43% consumed during

dinner

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time

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, the following 14% in breakfast and snack

time

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, which has an equal share, and the rest of 29% is at lunch.

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dinner

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also

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regarded as the

time

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when saturated fat is mostly consumed (37%). Just over a quarter of it is consumed at lunch, a fifth from snacks, and 16% from breakfast.

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, Snack

time

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contributes to a consumption of 42% added

sugar

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Dinner

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shares 23% of added

sugar

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intake and 16% of it during breakfast.

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, the rest-19% added

sugar

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is consumed

while

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having lunch.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, dinner, time with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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