The graph below shows the number of hours per day on average that children spent watching television between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates information about the screen
hours
of children watching television per day between 1950 and 2010. Overall
, It is clear that
although
the screen hours
in 1950 were fewer than one, they were much higher after 1980 until 2010.
Looking more closely at the data, in 1950, the hours
of children watching television were 0.3. However
, there was a slight increase to 0.3 hours
in 1960 before the level rocketed to 4 hours
in 1980. Additionally
, there was a steady fluctuation between 3.8 hours
and 4.1 hours
between 1980 and 2000. Lastly
, from then
on, the hours
of children watching television was a minimal decrease to 3.5 hours
in 2010.Submitted by stellachen28577 on
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