The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The information about the ratio of
younger
generation who took part in various Add an article
the younger
a younger
sport
activities Change the noun form
sports
in
particular
area is illustrated by a given bar chart in the period of 20 years. The data is Add an article
a particular
callibrated
in numbers.
Correct your spelling
calibrated
To conclude
, it is evident from the graph that majority
was seen in gentle walking, Correct article usage
the majority
whereas
the least was observed in basketball.
Expounding the chart in detail, a slight discrepancy was noticed in the gentle walking activity from 1997 to 2007 which was 50 thousand and approximately 55 thousand, correspondingly. Further
analysis reveals that,
the number of youth who participated in basketball steadily inclined from 9,000 to 23,000 during 20 years, Remove the comma
apply
however
, there was sharp decline was apparent in the number of youngsters who played cricket in 1997 and 2007, the former one was almost 27,000 and the latter was 8000. Moving ahead, a negligible difference was observed in jogging activity which was around 1000.
As further
scrutiny reveals, the number of teenagers who joined Correct article usage
the gym
gym
remained constant between 1997 and 2007 Correct article usage
the gym
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
stood
at almost 35,000. Probing ahead, a significant increment could be seen in the Wrong verb form
standing
numbers
of younger people who played football from 1997 to 2007 which was 32,000 and 49,000 Fix the agreement mistake
number
respondingly
. Correct your spelling
responding
correspondingly
Hence
forward, the participation in hiking had incresed
by 20,000 by 2007.Correct your spelling
increased
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