The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting ans reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting ans reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph represents the results of a survey about the tendencies of two drink types that
contains
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caffeine (
coffee
and tea) in 5 cities in Australia.
Overall
, all the cities, except Adelaide, preferred to consume their drinks outside. Compared to the other type,
coffee
that needs to be brewed by the consumer
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is preffered
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preffered
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preferred
the least in all cities and
people
used
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use
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granualed
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granulated
coffee
over
this
.
Total
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The total
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number
of
coffee
drinkers at home was higher than the
number
of
people
who preferred to drink at cafes. More
people
used
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use
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granuladed
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granulated
coffee
over
coffee
types that need to be brewed. The gap between these
to
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two
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types was higher in Sydney and Melbourne.
Bristbane
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Brisbane
and Hobart consumed the most instant
coffee
over 50% and just under 55%, respectively. Adelaide was the only city that preferred instant
coffe
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coffee
over cafe
coffee
. The
number
of
coffee
and tea drinkers in a cafe was lower than
total
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a total
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number
of at-home
coffee
drinkers. With just under 65%, more
people
went to cafes for caffeine consumption dy drinks in Melbourne and Hobart,
in
contrast
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Adelaide was the least in
this
category, with just under 50%.
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