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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting ans reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting ans reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph represents the results of a survey about the tendencies of two drink types that
contains
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 caffeine (
coffee
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 and tea) in 5 cities in Australia.
Overall
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, all the cities, except Adelaide, preferred to consume their drinks outside. Compared to the other type,
coffee
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 that needs to be brewed by the consumer
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is preffered
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preffered
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preferred
 the least in all cities and
people
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used
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use
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granualed
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granulated
coffee
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 over
this
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.
Total
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The total
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number
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 of
coffee
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 drinkers at home was higher than the
number
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 of
people
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 who preferred to drink at cafes. More
people
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used
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use
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granuladed
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granulated
coffee
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 over
coffee
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 types that need to be brewed. The gap between these
to
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two
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 types was higher in Sydney and Melbourne.
Bristbane
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Brisbane
 and Hobart consumed the most instant
coffee
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 over 50% and just under 55%, respectively. Adelaide was the only city that preferred instant
coffe
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coffee
 over cafe
coffee
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. The
number
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 of
coffee
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 and tea drinkers in a cafe was lower than
total
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a total
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number
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 of at-home
coffee
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 drinkers. With just under 65%, more
people
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 went to cafes for caffeine consumption dy drinks in Melbourne and Hobart,
in
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contrast
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contrast,
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 Adelaide was the least in
this
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 category, with just under 50%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, people, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 3 times.
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