The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph represents the
number
of travelers
Change the spelling
travellers
came
from outside countries to a specific nation in Europe from 1987 to 2007.
Correct pronoun usage
who came
Overall
the number
of total visitors in each category
showed an increase during the given period, and the maximum numbers was
in 2002 with the lakes and 2007 with the coast. Despite the mountains Change the verb form
were
increased
steadily throughout the whole period, the other two categories showed both upward and downward trends.
The most Wrong verb form
increasing
fluctuated
Wrong verb form
fluctuating
category
was the lakes. There were two main trends in the number
of lake visitors, it increased from 10 thousand
to around 75 thousand
, which was the higest
Correct your spelling
highest
number
in that year. After
this
rise, it showed a decrease from that number
to 50 thousand
, between 1987 and 2002, respectively. The coast received the highest number
of tourists in 1987 with 40 thousands
and showed a little decrease in 1992. After 1992, Change to singular
thousand
this
category
showed a climb with no fluctuations in it. After the coasts being the highest number
in 2022, this
category
became the top with approximately 75 thousand
in the final year.
Visitors went
to the areas with mountains increased steadily from 20 Correct pronoun usage
who went
thousand
to approximately 35 thousand
and there were no downward trends in any year in this
category
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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