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The pie charts give information about the average household consumption in Japan and Malaysia in five categories.

The pie charts give information about the average household consumption in Japan and Malaysia in five categories.
The pie charts illustrate
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the common
consumption
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 of households in five categories between
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 and
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. It can be seen that
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 and
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 have different at the highest percentages of household
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. Commonly,
people
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 in
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 spend 34% on housing.
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Japanese
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people
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 spend less than
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,
Japanese
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people
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 only spend 21% in the housing field.
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, the highest percentage of
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 of
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 households is in other goods and services, they spent 29% on that area.
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, Malaysian households consume 26% of other goods and services, and the difference between the two of them is slightly little,
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only 3%. looking at the information in more detail, similar in other goods and service
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, the gap is only 3% in the food area,
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 spends 27%
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Japan
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people
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 only 24%. It is noticeable
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 and
Malaysia
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 have something in common, the lowest
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 of a household is in health care,
Japan
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 only 6% and
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only 3%. In
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, it is noticeable that
Japanese
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people
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 spend 20% of their allowances.
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Malaysia
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 only spends 10%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, japan, malaysia, people, japanese with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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