The pie charts give information about the average household consumption in Japan and Malaysia in five categories.

The pie charts illustrate

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the common

consumption

of households in five categories between

Japan

and

Malaysia

. It can be seen that

Japan

and

Malaysia

have different at the highest percentages of household

consumption

. Commonly,

people

in

Malaysia

spend 34% on housing.

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Japanese

people

spend less than

Malaysia

,

Japanese

people

only spend 21% in the housing field.

On the other hand

, the highest percentage of

consumption

of

Japanese

households is in other goods and services, they spent 29% on that area.

Moreover

, Malaysian households consume 26% of other goods and services, and the difference between the two of them is slightly little,

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only 3%. looking at the information in more detail, similar in other goods and service

consumption

, the gap is only 3% in the food area,

Malaysia

spends 27%

while

Japan

people

only 24%. It is noticeable

Japan

and

Malaysia

have something in common, the lowest

consumption

of a household is in health care,

Japan

only 6% and

Malaysia

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only 3%. In

the

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transport

consumption

, it is noticeable that

Japanese

people

spend 20% of their allowances.

By contrast

,

Malaysia

only spends 10%.